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Site:
Austin American-Statesman
URL: www.austin360.com
Screen captured: 4:00 p.m., Nov. 7, 2000
Site:
The Tennessean
URL: www.tennessean.com
Screen captured: 4:00 p.m., Nov. 7, 2000
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Questions
for Discussion
How are online
journalists using the Internet to tell the story of the 2000 presidential
election?
- What are your
initial impressions of this site?
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- How is this site
using writing to tell the story?
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What are initial impressions
of this site? |
Murray:
At first glance, the Austin
American-Statesman site appears rather drab.
No photos or illustrations were available, or at least
they would not appear in the boxes when I clicked on them.
In
"It's your call, America," staff writers Ken Herman
and Ken Foskett gave more space to Al Gore than to Texas
Gov. George W. Bush. Herman wrote a story about the
Bush camp and its hour-by-hour watch. Leah Quinn wrote
a story about a local election judge and the work involved.
"It's not 'Springer,' but TV networks counting on just
as much drama" was a catchy headline over a story about
Election Night coverage.
One interesting story was about Lyndon Baines Johnson
and his quest for votes in 1937. Although also drab,
the CenTex Voter's Guide is informative and includes
information on national, state and local levels. All
of the writers have e-mail addresses listed. The site
includes links to various sections. An editor from the
newspaper told me about two weeks ago that the paper
is working on expanding its online operation. As of
now, most of the content seems to have been taken from
the newspaper.
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Markos:
I have tried to form my first impressions about Tennessean.com
without clicking on anything. I thought that the home
page should be doing all of the work if we are talking
about first impressions. And since there isn't much
of a content on the home page, most of my first impressions
will depend on format rather than on content.
Now,
what do I think of the Tennessean.com home page? My
first impression about Tennessean.com is that it is
a "standard" website. It has lists on the sides and
story introductions in the center. Almost every newspaper
website I know has the same format.
I am asking the same question about Tennessean.com that
I have been about all the websites which have endorsed
this format. Newspapers (print) place their most important
stories at the top right, and in rare cases at the top
left, but never (to my knowledge) in the center. Why
do websites always place their stories in the center?
I know these are questions that are least appropriate
to ask a few hours before election results are to be
announced. But if you ask me why I am asking them, it
is because the Tennessean.com format is so similar to
most other formats I have seen that my first impressions
are hardly different from my impressions about other
sites.
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Markos:
You mentioned Gore getting more space than Bush. Has
that given you any impressions about the website's impartiality?
Or what is your guess that it's trying to do?
If
it were completely up to you to edit the website, what
would you do about the drab appearance? Photos will
certainly help, but how would you reorganize the text
to make it more attractive?
Would you say the website has a lot of links, or did
you feel it was trying to to tell you everything itself?
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Murray:
At least Tennessean.com has a color photo in the center
and some patriotic splashes of color on the front page.
Maybe the page designers are trying to attract viewers/readers
attention without the readers having to scroll. You might
look at the lead story as a centerpiece -- that information
appearing above the fold as if in a newspaper rack. Maybe
if some interesting stories or links are presented there,
the reader will "buy" the material. At least the Tennessean.com
front page is not as dull as Austin 360. |
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Murray:
Since [Texas] is Bush's current home
of residence, where he has been governor for six years,
Austin's audience might feel saturated with Bush. I
am unaware if the newspaper endorsed a candidate, but
on Election Day it appears to be giving an impression
of balancing its content. I do like the idea that the
site offered a mix of local, state and national coverage.
If I were editing the website, I would add some color
photos and perhaps graphics, especially as states went
in favor of one candidate or another. This web page
has numerous links, especially to other departments
such as sports. As I mentioned earlier, the staff has
plans to expand and redevelop the site. I wish that
could have happened before the national election.
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Markos:
You're
right. I certainly would not have liked a page with no
pictures and too much text. I also agree that the Tennessean
is a lot more attractive than the Austin-American-Statesman.
But perhaps it's because I wanted my first impressions
to be deliberately shallow that I did not comment beyond
that general format I talked about. |
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| 2.
How
is the site using interactivity
to tell the story? |
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Murray:
Austin360.com has a link labeled Interactive Features.
I clicked the link and found a section on Gov. Bush's
White House bid. Under a headline that Perot endorses
Bush and Bush admits DUI conviction was the question:
"Will this affect your vote?" Bush was leading Gore
49 percent to 42 percent in a poll that showed Nader
with 6 percent. More than 41,000 viewers had responded
to the poll. The site offered a message area to discuss
the race. People can click and chat about various topics,
including Campaign 2000 as well as Elvis Lives! The
site offers a wide selection of links to click on. The
site appears to have some interactive opportunities.
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Markos:
The
Tennessean.com has a forum where you can
send your comments. There are long e-mails with no graphics
or pictures, so people are not likely to be drawn into
them. Also, the messages are full of opinions, written
by unidentified people, so readers are obviously not
expected to trust these pieces.
But certainly, Tennessean.com is using its forum to
keep people glued to its website, engaged in debates,
and sometimes in name-calling and all sorts of comebacks.
Whatever, but that keeps them in the Tennessean.com
website, and they will get to read the latest updates
as soon as they are posted.
Tennessean.com also invites visitors to join in its
e-mail news update service, which is an attempt to get
readers into the website while they are checking their
e-mails.
So, in a nutshell, interactivity is more of a marketing
device for the Tennessean.com.
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| Markos:
In the interactive features, is there a lot of information
that you were not aware of earlier? Is there a lot of
news? Because at Tennessean.com, there is virtually no
news, which is what made me wonder why they would bother
to maintain this forum. My guess is that they just want
to keep people in that Web site as they bring them their
updates. |
| Murray:
The Austin site offers several opportunities for the readers
to interact with the site's content and with each other.
For example, there are some chat rooms and the poll. Reader
response to the presidential poll seemed to be an active
feature. My opinion is that sites should be highly interactive,
allowing readers many chances to respond to the site's
content and each other. |
Murray:
Interactivity appears to be one of the keys to attracting
and retaining viewers on a website. As you know, in
order for communication to be successful, the receivers
must be afforded a chance to provide feedback. Those
persons who are attracted to a site by chat rooms or
opinion polls might also decide to read various news
items and perhaps even advertisements on the site. As
I have mentioned, the Austin site has some pretty solid
content but it is unattractive to look at. Notice how
some of the more nationally oriented websites have several
devices to attract attention. The Austin site offers
some interactive selections, but the site had not been
updated as of 7 p.m.
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Markos:
Right, people won't turn on their PCs, log on to your
website and eat dinner while they wait for your latest
update (like they would do with TV), so you have to
give them a reason not to click and move on to some
other site, or not to shut down their computers and
watch TV instead. Right now, there are hundreds of people
in the "forums" fiercely battling over all sorts of
issues. I think interactivity is doing a great job getting
people's attention.
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| 3.
How is the site using writing to
tell the story? |
| Murray:
Reporters on the site used writing effectively to tell
the election story from an Austin angle -- prior to election
results tonight. As of 9 p.m., I could not find any locally
generated copy from the Austin American-Statesman to update
the presidential results. For the night shift, the site
staff seemed to turn coverage over to the Associated Press,
which one could reach through links. The local staff writers
are good, and I wonder when their coverage stories will
be posted. One AP writer had a cute lead: "No brainer:
Bush wins home state." I believe the typical Austin area
reader/viewer would look elsewhere tonight for results.
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Markos:
One story about The Tennessean's political milestone
in Tennessean.com is very cleverly written. With years
used as subheadings, the writer, Larry Daughtrey, narrates
the state's most significant political landmark events.
The sentences are short (15 words on average) and very
short paragraphs no longer than five lines. Plus, a
chronological way of narrating a story tends to keep
readers going. The headline, "From the state's beginnings
to Al Gore, a look at Tennessean's political milestones,"
tries to indicate the relevance of Tennessean's political
history on election night.
In all the stories I read, there are virtually no passive-voice
sentences. The writing is quite formal.
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Markos:
I noticed the same thing in Tennessean.com. They haven't
even updated the page for hours now. When Gore won Florida,
the St. Petersburg Times posted the news minutes after
the news was broadcast on CNN. But Tennessean.com hasn't
been that fast when Bush won Tennessee.
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Murray:
The Austin American-Statesman writers write well,
but if one observes the site tonight, he/she would think
they all took the night off. I wonder when the election
coverage stories will be posted. Some Texans probably
really enjoyed the feature story about LBJ in his younger
days.
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Murray:
In summary, effective websites, in order to attract
and retain readers, must be attractive and informative.
They must offer updated information that readers want
or need. If they shut down early, especially on occasions
such as Election Night, they take the chance that readers
will turn to more accommodating sites and might be tempted
to return there. Writing should be crisp and tight,
and the site should be as interactive as possible to
allow readers a sense of participation.
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Markos:
Tennessean.com is a local-oriented website, but
considering that the state is Al Gore's home, this site
should have been shining. But even something as unusual
as Bush winning Gore's home state is not moving this
website. Yes, these people must be off!
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