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Site:
Salon.com
URL:http://salon.com
Screen captured: 4:40 EST, Nov. 7, 2000

Site:
Slate.com
URL: http://slate.com
Screen captured: 4:40 EST, Nov. 7, 2000
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Questions
for Discussion
How are online
journalists using the Internet to tell the story of the 2000 presidential
election?
- What are your
initial impressions of this site?
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- How is this site
using writing to tell the story?
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| 1.
What are initial impressions
of this site? |
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Salon.com
Gula:
Hi Borzou,
Take a look at Salon.com when you get a chance. I enjoyed
reading this site because it tells so many stories about
the election, rather than reciting statistics and beating
to death stories that every other news site is covering.
In particular, check out the excellent Election 2000
guide. Salon.com offers printable scorecards broken
down by time zone. It gives a synopsis of what to look
for in each time zone, the electoral vote stakes by
state, and the hot Senate and House races.
I enjoyed how the features on Bush and Gore talk about
the mood of each campaign and give me insight on why
each campaign has reached this point.
Salon.com also offers lists of articles a political
junkie would be interested in, such as an index of political
ad reviews. It has packaged its Goofus and Gallant series,
stories on the presidential candidates, and stories
on the environment and death penalty. Audio feeds also
are available.
Criticism: Salon says it offers "continuous election
returns, breaking news and analysis." However, it seems
to rely on the wire for its real-time election coverage
and I could not find time-stamps on the stories. All
had datelines, but I could not tell how "real-time"
the coverage actually was.
While I was looking at the site, it updated with two
fresh stories on the politics page. That was the only
way I knew I was getting new stories. That makes me
want to check out other sites.
Also, the site has the same story listed twice on the
main politics page. Oops.
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Slate.com
Daragahi:
Hi Lori,
Not much in the way of innovative interactive gizmos
at Slate.com,
which tries to bring its chatty literary style ( some
might call it, gossip) to the elections.
The homepage promises, "Who's winning?" But at 4 p.m.,
Slate included no such articles or features. Kind of
a bummer. The site instead links to WSJ.com writer John
Fund's "hour-by-hour" Political
Diary, which reads like it was written Sunday
evening.
It's about me today The centerpiece of today's coverage,
however, is the "How
we voted feature," brief comments on how and
why "Slatesters" voted today (Big surprise: Gore wins).
Certainly, some may find this sort of exercise a tad
self-indulgent. I mean, what's next? What family squabbles
Slatesters' had during Thanksgiving dinner? But I wondered
whether they simply couldn't find a sexy enough batch
of second-rate celebrities to discuss their presidential
preferences.
On the other hand, a lot of journalists hide behind
the cloak of political anonymity, and here the writers
put their positions out for everyone to see. The package
comes with editor Michael
Kinsley's explanation of why the fact that Gore
wins among the staffers doesn't mean Slate is biased:
"[T]there are so many other pressures and prejudice
built into the news-including occasional overcompensation
for fear of appearing biased-that raw political bias
plays a fairly small role."
Cheap Shots! But two last-minute pieces of anti-Bush
dirt don't do much to bolster Kinsley's argument:
- "Is
George W. Bush Barred
From Canada?"
-- about whether the Texas Governor's drunk-driving
conviction prevents him from getting a visa to the
Great White North.
- "Could
Bush stage a coup?" -- a conversation
between Paul Burka, of the Texas Monthly and Walter
Shapiro, of USA Today, about what Dubya would do if
he won the popular vote but lost the electoral college
count.
Kind
regards,
Borzou
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Daragahi:
Hi Lori, I should mention first off that I've been reading
Salon.com for a long time. It's a Web site that tries
to be kind of a daily updated Harper's or New Yorker,
a sort of high-minded literary publication for the Web.
Like Salon.com it's more about commentary from folks
like David Horowitz or Joe Conason and reporting from
a handful of correspondents like Jake Tapper than about
real-time news. They promise perspective and context
rather than late-breaking news.
Like Slate, its "Election
Guide 2000" looks like it could have been tossed
off a few days ago. It looks like most of their reporters
have decided to sleep in during the morning and afternoon
in anticipation of a long harrowing night.... expect
fresher, cooler copy as the evening progresses.
To me sites like Salon and Slate really shine a day
or two or week after a big breaking news event has happened.
Their commentary on the Lewinsky scandal, though biased
toward Clinton, was groundbreaking, with some of the
most colorful and exciting prose I've seen in any publication
-- offline or online.
Kind regards,
Borzou
Gula:
Hi Borzou,
Good points. I don't read Salon.com regularly, but what
I've seen tonight, I've enjoyed. I feel as if I'm reading
stories, not just "accounts" of the political campaign.
I'll have to keep an eye on the site after the election.
I love good writing, particularly on the Web. Let me
know if there are other sites you'd recommend.
Take care,
Lori
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Gula:Greetings
Borzou,
Interesting. After receiving your mail, Slate actually
updated with two stories above the "Who's winning?"
feature. However, one was a link to an MSNBC story on
heavy voter turnout. As a surfer, I'd be tempted to
switch to the MSNBC.com page.
Slate also posted "Don't Rush Me! (Part 9)," but I didn't
get a lot out of it because I've already voted. By this
point in the election, I'm focused on the polls and
who's leading, not some guy who's telling me he's still
hasn't decided for whom to vote.
I did enjoy "What Are Exit Polls?" by Emily Yoffe. I
thought that was a nice story to do on Election Day.
Talk to you later.
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Daragahi:
Hi
Lori,
Thanks! You pointed out a couple things I hadn't noticed
before. Let me dive back in and check 'em out and then
I'll continue... Okay, I'm back.
I liked Mickey Kaus's "Don't
Rush Me!" series,
sort of a good-natured rant about being an undecided
voter directed at no one and everyone in particular.
"I was getting ready to go vote for Gore, when I had
a pro-Bush thought in the shower." Dude just seems somewhat
irritated.
Kind regards,
Borzou
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| 2.
How
is the site using interactivity
to tell the story? |
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Gula:Greetings
Borzou,
I'm enjoying reading the stories on Salon.com, but as
far as interactivity goes, I'm not find much ground
broken here. I think of interactivity as:
Ways for readers to interact with the site and
its reporters through such options as chat rooms, bulletin/message
boards and e-mail.
Tools
that allow the reader to experience the story other
than through reading the traditional news story.
The site offers several political bulletin boards, but
I couldn't find a live chat on this election night.
I think something similar to what the www.washingtonpost.com
offers with its live chats would work well here.
Election reports via MP3 audio files is kind of cool,
but only one is listed for Election Day. It'd be nice
if Salon would let us listen to reaction or comments
as the night goes on.
Salon has an appealing photo of a Virginia voter to
lead its page, but it's no more than I would expect
from any other news site. The site also includes a link
to send Letters to the Editor at the end of each story,
but, again, it's what everyone seems to do.
The site's strength clearly is its writing and storytelling.
-- Lori
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Daragahi:
Hi Lori,
Like I was saying, Slate.com has little in the way of
cool tools fully utilizing the interactive capacity
of the web, blah, blah, blah. It does have MySlate,
sort of a personal folder of articles you can keep on
your hard drive. Editor Michael Kinsley, in an advertorial,
says that the idea came from the head of Bill and Melinda
Gates' charity foundation; she likened it to "a shopping
cart like Amazon, so I can go through Slate saving articles
I want to read."
MySlate's "Listen"
function uses text-to-speech technology so you can play
audio versions of any story you're reading. "It's not
great, frankly," Kinsley admits, "but it's fun." So
I gave it a shot. The spooky synthetic voice makes HAL
sound like a touchie-feelie kinda guy. But it was pretty
fun.
A note: You've gotta register to get a "Passport" from
Microsoft to gain access to MySlate.
The
Fray, Slate's discussion threads, appear
to be closely linked to individual columns. They avoid
the general-interest political free-for-alls some message
boards become. And at least during my cursory glances,
I couldn't seem to locate much back and forth between
the message board participants. I think political message
boards are kind of tiresome, anyway. They just seem
to provide a platform for anonymous yahoos to mouth
off. "Though the votes haven't been counted," writes
some guy with the handle, Some Guy, "it looks like the
Socialists are going to win this round."
Oh, the site search engine appears to work pretty well,
although, for the life of me, I can't seem to find that
"Exits Polls Explained" article you were tellin' me
about.
Kind regards,
Borzou
Gula:
Hola Borzou,
Interesting that you can't find the exit poll story
via the search engine. It's the topic of what seems
to be a column called "Explainer." But the site certainly
should be able to find it.
Did you see the Electoral Maps section under the politics
area? It's on the left rail of the site. It's a nice
feature, even though the maps actually are on other
sites such as Fox News (very cool) and New Republic.
The producers there, though, might want to periodically
check on these links because the Politics.com map really
stinks.
-- Lori
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Daragahi:
Hi
Lori,
Yeah, I think Slate actually has more interactive tools
than Salon, and that ain't sayin' much! Your suggestion
for some sort of interaction between the site and readers
other than message boards is cool. But I'm not so sure.
I remember when Salon's rightwing columnist David Horowitz
used to respond to people on the message boards and
he got inundated with so many nasty comments, he stopped
posting.
One of the things I've always loved about Salon has
been the comics, especially the highly political full-color
weekly
strip by Tom Tomorrow. How about some
flash animation cartoons next?
Thanks for veering the conversation toward coming up
with new ideas instead of just critiquing the websites.
Kind regards,
Borzou
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Gula:
Borzou,
You may be right on target with those message boards.
I've seen similar attacks on the Yahoo message boards.
Not very useful for the serious reader.
I missed the cartoons! What was I thinking?
-- Lori
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Daragahi:Hi
Lori,
You're right, the links to the five electoral
maps (on the politics home) is a good idea, giving
you a chance to compare different news outlets' analyses.
Yay!!! It took a while but I finally found that Emily
Yoffe "Explainer" column
on exit polling.
Thanks,
Borzou
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| 3.
How is the site using writing to
tell the story? |
| Gula:
Hi
Borzou, I plan to bookmark this site based on its writing.
These writers really know how to tell a story.
The pieces on Bush and Gore are more than just election
previews. They provide insight and perspective on both
campaigns: the political personality clashes, the exhaustion,
the elation. The descriptions are so colorful. My only
criticism is that at times, they seem to ease into more
opinion than I prefer, but overall, I enjoy the lively
writing.
For example, in Salon,
Alicia Montgomery writes about Gore: Seeming exhausted,
he stumbled through his remarks, pausing more than once
to find his place. He listed the accomplishments of
the Clinton administration like an uncertain waiter
listing the specials of the day. "We have the most diverse
... self-government in the history ... of our nation,"
he stammered, and he mentioned that "we now have the
lowest African-American unemployment in the history
of the United States" without a hint of verve. The surging
surplus, the tripling stock market, the raised standard
of living: They all ran together in the tuneless hum
of Gore's speech.
I don't know about you, but when I read this, I feel
tired.
In Salon,
Jake Tapper writes about Bush: Bush's serene demeanor
this morning provides a stark contrast to the preening,
mugging cockiness exhibited by his staff, most notably
chief strategist Karl Rove, but also a handful of lower-level
staffers who have become insufferable.
When I read this, I picture exactly what the writer
is talking about. It's like watching a movie of the
Bush campaign in my mind.
Like you said before, breaking news isn't Salon.com's
strength. Early in the evening it updated with a three-graph
story on Bush taking the first 20 electoral votes. When,
I don't know, because there is no time-stamp. But the
story is so short and doesn't tell me any more than
I could find on CNN or another online news site.
It seems to be relying on the Associated Press for its
election coverage, which seems like a smart move. Clearly,
the site's strength is its more in-depth writing.
Writers trying to develop their own "voice" should read
this site. Even though Salon's stories may push the
boundaries of length when it comes to online writing,
the voice, tone and humor of the stories kept me reading
to the end.
-- Lori
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Daragahi:
Hi
Lori, OK, now this is where Slate and Salon can really
shine."My phone is ringing nonstop with the latest exit
poll numbers," wrote Jacob Weisberg, in "Exit
Poll Madness," posted at 3:30 p.m. today. "My
inbox is spilling over with them. But because Slate
has agreed not to publish this data under the threat
of a lawsuit from the Voter News Service (VNS), I can't
share them with you."
I
love the nuanced approach they bring to political writing.
"In many ways Gore is an awful candidate," Michael Brus,
writes in the "How
Slatesters Voted" package. "He's too beholden
to the elderly to reform Social Security, too beholden
to the teachers' unions to reform education, and too
beholden to various interest groups to simplify the
tax code. His campaign has been based on fear and cheap
populism." But believe it or not, Brus ends up endorsing
Gore!
But were they able to bring their brand of wit to readers
in Internet time? Sadly, unfortunately, they seem to
have abdicated the evening to coverage piped in from
CNN and MSNBC, with Chris Suellentrop writing summaries
of stories culled from around the Web.
Slate sparks some chuckles with a big headline on its
home page screaming "Dewey Defeats Truman," satirizing
the Chicago Tribune's horrible 1948 page-one mistake.
But we've yet to see any time-sensitive online literary
writing about the election. Come on guys! Hurry up and
spew out some fun stuff!
Kind regards,
Borzou
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Gula:
Borzou,
I'm not sure what kind of readership they would get
from the die-hard political junkies tonight who likely
have every television on in the house on a different
channel, and are getting streaming video over their
high-speed DSL or cable lines. It's a tough call. Slate
and Salon hook people with their slicing stories, but
is tonight the night people want to read it?
I was just checking out the message boards for Jacob
Weisberg's "Exit Poll Madness." Frankly, I became disinterested
quickly and started checking out the ads on the right
rail.
-- Lori
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Daragahi:
Hi
Lori,
Yeah, that's a good question. Is literary journalism
what people want the night of a tense election? A lot
of people could get more fast-paced information through
broadcast media (especially cable news) or through streaming
video on the Web. But it's all kind of the same everywhere,
isn't it? We're watching CNN as we write this and although
the vote-count proximity of the two candidates make
this election especially compelling, it's still kind
of a tried and true format. We've both covered elections,
and you know the standard, formulaic stories you hammer
out when you're on deadline during election eve.
I wonder...
a)
whether there's an as yet unserved audience for well-written,
real-time analysis of the elections and
b) whether the Internet presents an as yet unexplored
opportunity to bring a new brand of writing to tired
old subjects like elections.
Kind regards,
Borzou
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Daragahi:
Hi
Lori,
I love Salon's writing, too. But I can't for the life
of me understand why it's so difficult to bring Salon's
strengths to election night. Perhaps both Salon and
Slate both figure most people will be stuck to their
television sets tonight and check on the Web tomorrow
at work. Maybe some stuff'll go up later in the night.
When they give breaking news a shot, the results are
excellent. Check out the Anthony York article
on Hillary's victory: "Grand Central Station is swarming
with Secret Service. Everybody inside the Grand Hyatt
seems to have a press credential around their neck or
a wire in their ear, waiting for the president of the
United States, and the woman poised to be New York's
next U.S. senator." Good job, Anthony!
Kind regards,
Borzou
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Hi
Borzou,
I just checked out the Hillary Clinton story. It had
my attention to the end. I particularly enjoyed this
part: "But
she is also sure to inspire pit bull-style frothing
as she waltzes into the American House of Lords on Jan.
3. "Oh, she'll definitely be used as a foil," Kerrey
says. "Look, a Clinton is a Clinton is a Clinton. My
guess is that she'll be used in Republican fundraising
letters for the next six years. She'll lighten Ted Kennedy's
load as a foil used to raise money."
I also see Salon posted an Electoral College map that
seems to be keeping up with voter.com's and cnn.com's
map updates. I did notice some funkiness around 9:10
p.m. EST. First the map had Gore 145, Bush 130. When
I updated, the map reverted to the 8:45 p.m. map with
Gore 123, Bush 130. I refreshed several times and the
map switched back and forth at least several times.
I stopped after that and started watching CNN.
--Lori
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