Don
Renfroe Design Director |
| The editor's note refered to our 10-page special section, which contained vingnettes from community folks. Those vignettes, in turn, refered to videotape of the interviews on our website. |
| Monica
Moses Visual Journalism Faculty The Poynter Institute |
| The main signal that
this is a special day in Kalamazoo is the commitment of the front page
to Sept. 11 coverage. It's a thorough page, though it may lack the punch
of last year's stark front. A paper needs to be able to deliver big news
quickly and powerfully, as the Gazette did last year. But on other occasions,
more invention is called for. I wish this year's front had a more distinctive
visual approach. There are ambitious stories, clearly, and lots of text,
but readers could use more white space, a bigger focal point and better
use of display type to help them see the main points of stories more quickly.
When coverage is 24/7, there is more pressure on visuals and display type
to make the small type look worth reading. |